Question

11．假定你是李华，你的朋友李明写信告诉你他因不善交友而苦恼，感觉在日常学习生活中缺乏和同学之间的交流，请根据下面提示给他回信，提出建议．
提示：
1．友善、乐于助人；
2．多与他人交流，寻找自己的知心朋友；
3．多参加学校组织的各种活动．
注意：
1．词数：100左右；
2．可以适当发挥，以使短文连贯．
3．开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数．
Dear Li Ming，
I'm sorry to hear that
                                                      
Yours，
LiHua．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文，让我们给不善于交友而苦恼的李明回信，这需要我们发挥英语思维，将提供的信息用英语完整流畅的表达出来．写作需要用第一人称，时态主要是一般现在时，内容要点包括：友善、乐于助人；多与他人交流；多参加活动．我们此篇作文分为两部分，第一部分为交友的建议．第二部分为作者的美好祝愿．
重点短语与句型：
be helpful to 对…有益
be faithful to 忠诚于
develop a good friendship培养好的友谊
get along well with 相处的好
高分句型一：First，be kind，friendly and polite to others and always ready to help others，through which you'll get well paid..此句用了介词加关系代词引导定语从句
高分句型二：Besides，it is also very important that friends should be faithful to each other．此句用了it 做形式主语，真正主语为that从句．

解答 Dear Li Ming，
        I'm sorry to hear you're feeling worried for failing to make friends．Some tips below may be helpful to you．First，be kind，friendly and polite to others and always ready to help others，through which you'll get well paid．（高分句型一）Second，try to communicate with others more，for it helps strengthen your ties with friends and lots of misunderstandings can be avoided．Third，take an active part in activities，such as sports，games，travels，parties，etc．This way，you'll get more chances to communicate with others．Besides，it is also very important that friends should be faithful to each other．（高分句型二）（ 交友的建议）
         Anyhow，there're many ways to develop a good friendship．Hope you'll get along well with your friends．（作者的美好祝愿）
         Best wishes．
                                                                                                                                                                                                  Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                   Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．