Question

【题目】文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 不规范答题者不给分。

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Dear Lily，

I am so pleasant to have a word with you about what you are going through right now. It is natural that people often miss your parents the first time they leave home. The fact is you cannot live with your parents forever. Most people had to leave home for higher education or employment. It is important that you should realize that present separation contributes to the healthy and optimistic personality.

You need to make friend in school and share ideas with those live closest to you now. Because you will still，miss your parents，your new friends will bring happiness and joy to your new life. Beside，I suggest that you enjoy yourself by taking an active part in various activities in school, from whom you will get much pleasure.

Wish you happiness every day.

Faithfully yours，

Editor

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】pleasant→pleased

【2】your→their

【3】is后加that

【4】had→have

【5】the→a

【6】friend→friends

【7】those后加who或live→living

【8】Because→Although或Though

【9】Beside→Besides

【10】whom→which

【解析】

试题分析：

【1】pleasant→pleased 考查形容词。pleasant表示客观上的“令人高兴或愉快的”，指的是被修饰名词给别人的感觉；而pleased 表示的是主观上“感到高兴或愉快的”，指的是被修饰名词自身的感觉。此处表示感到高兴，故pleasant改pleased。

【2】your→their 考查代词。此处代词是指代前面的people，故用第三人称，复数，故将your改为their。

【3】is 后加that 考查连词。is后是一个表语从句，不缺少成分，而且意思完整，但缺少引导词，所以用that，that引导表语从句不能省略。

【4】had→have 考查时态。本文是用一般现在时描述的，本句也是，故将had改为have。

【5】the→a 考查冠词。句意：重要的是你应该认识到目前的分离有助于一个健康和乐观的个性。此处不是特指，是泛指，单数，故the改为a。

【6】friend→friends 考查名词。“交朋友”应用复数，故将friend改为friends。

【7】those后加who或live→living 考查连词或非谓语动词。those后是一个定语从句，缺少主语，故加who就对了；或者将live变成非谓语动词也可以，live和那些人之间是主动关系，故用living。因此此题有两种改法，即：those后加who或live改living。

【8】Because→Although或Though 考查连词。此处前后句之间不存在因果关系，是让步关系，故改为Although或Though。

【9】Beside→Besides 考查副词。beside表示“在……旁边”，besides表示“除……之外”，结合此处意思，应用besides，故Beside改为Besides。

【10】whom→which 考查连词。此处是非限制性定语从句，指代前面的活动，是物，用which，故whom改which。