Question

【题目】假设你是高中生李越，有感于校园中存在的随意涂写（to scribble）和乱丢垃圾（to litter）的行为;请用英语给校长写一封100-120个词的信, 必须包括以下内容：

1说明写信目的； 2.对这些行为进行批评； 3.提出建议

注意：信头、落款及第一句已给出（不计词数）。

Dear Mr. Headmaster,

I’m Li Yue,a student from Class1, SeniorⅡ._______________________________________

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Yours faithfully,

Li Yue

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Mr. Headmaster,

I am Li Yue, a student from Class 1, Senior II. I am writing to draw your attention to some improper behavior among us students: littering and scribbling. It makes our school dirty and unpleasant, and does harm to the image of our school. I always feel ashamed whenever I see this. It is clearly not appropriate for a student to litter and scribble about.

I wonder if the school could place more dustbins around us and set up specific rules against such behaviour. At the same time, students should be encouraged to develop good habits and better behave themselves.

I believe that, with the joint efforts of both teachers and students, our school will become a more enjoyable place in the near future. Thank you for your consideration.

Yours faithfully,

Li Yue

【解析】

试题分析：分析要求可知，假设你是高中生李越，有感于校园中存在的随意涂写（to scribble）和乱丢垃圾（to litter）的行为;, 必须包括以下内容： 1说明写信目的； 2.对这些行为进行批评； 3.提出建议 。短文应该用一般现在时，第一人称和第三人称。词数100-120左右，不要太多或太少。尽量多使用较高级的词汇和短语以及固定句式，注意句子之间的连贯性。

【亮点说明】 文中用了一些高级的短语和句式。如：draw your attention to 、do harm to 、It is clearly not appropriate for引导的形式主语、whenever 引导的状语从句，I wonder if等都很不错。