Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

In a freezing cold day in January 1994,Jiesang Suonandajie found that he was looking for a group of poachers who were killing the endanger Tibetan antelope. Jiesang knew he had to move quick. He shouted to the poachers to put down his guns. Although surprising, the poachers had an advantage -there were fewer of them. In the battle which followed,Jiesang shot and killed. When his frozen body was found hours late he was still holding his gun. He had given his life save the Tibetan antelope.

Answer 1

1.把In改为On

2.把that改为what

3.把endanger改为endangered

4.把quick改为quickly

5.把his改为their

6.把surprising改为surprised

7.把fewer改为more

8.把shot改为was shot

9.把late改为later

10.把save改为to save

【解析】

1.

2. for缺少宾语，因此可以判断引导词作从句的宾语，What且在名词性从句中作主语，宾语，表语，而that引导的宾语从句后面要跟完整的句子。故用what.

3. antelope，故用endangered.

4.

5.

6.

7. of them.

8. shot.

9. hour later。固定搭配，故用later.

10. one’s life to do将生命奉献于做某事，故用to save.

考点：考查介词，副词，固定句式，固定短语，宾语从句等一些语法知识。