Question

【题目】最近校园欺凌事件再次成为舆论焦点，你们班也开展了相关讨论。请根据以下要点以“Say NO to School-bullying”为题，为学校网站写一篇英语文章，内容包括：

1.欺凌行为的危害；

2.提出至少两条建议，号召一起努力阻止校园暴力。

注意：1.内容包括以上要点，可适当增加细节；

2.词数100左右。

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Answer 1

【答案】Recently, school-bullying is a hot topic again. Students showed their fear and parents and teachers also expressed their great concern about it. Our class had a heated discussion and we have reached some agreements on how to solve the problem.

First of all, we should try every effort to prevent school-bullying happening for more and more students would drop out of school if their personal safely could not be guaranteed. Next, if we meet with school-bulling, we should not answer violence with violence, because it will result in more fighting. Instead, we should tell our teachers or parents about it. They will help us deal with it well and protect us from the bad guys. More importantly, the whole society should pay more attention to both physical and mental health of adolescents.

All in all, every student should behave himself and keep away from school-bullying.

【解析】本文是写一篇给定主题的书面表达，写作话题为校园欺凌事件的危害与建议。该话题贴近学生生活，容易下手。在写作时应注意要符合主题，通篇以一般现在时为主；要点要齐全，并且使用适当的连接词，使上下文行文流畅；行文思路要有逻辑性，条例清晰。学生可以采用简单句与复杂句结合的方法，并且同时尽量避免多次使用相同的单词与词组，使内容更加的充实。

【范文亮点】

文章开头以 school-bullying is a hot topic again引出话题，言简意赅，主旨鲜明。文章用First of all，Next, More importantly这些连接词，层层递进，条理清晰，讲出了对于校园暴力的建议。最后用All in all总结，首尾呼应，文章结构紧凑。文章还用了express concern about, try efforts to do, drop out of, pay attention to等高级短语让文章看起来更有料。特别是最后一句内容让阅卷老师眼前一亮。