Question

【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Harry,

I have good news for you that there will be a international music camp in our city this summer The camp is openly to students from all over the world who is interested in playing musical instruments. I know you are a music lover, so why not to join the camp together with us?

At the camp, campers are giving classes by experts in the moring and in the afternoon they do a couple of hour of practice. In the evening, there is a music exchange concert that campers can give performances and plays different kinds of music from their own counties.

I’m sure you will have a lot of funs there. I’m looking forward your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】1.a→an

2.openly→open

3.is→are

4.to join→to去掉

5.giving→given

6.hour→hours

7.that→where

8.plays→play

9.funs→fun

10.forward后加to

【解析】international 开头发音为元音，所以定冠词应为an。故将a改为an。

“be open to..”为固定搭配，意为“对...开放”。故将openly改为open

3.“The camp is openly to students from all over the world who is interested in playing musical instruments.”宾语从句中主语为“students”，所以be动词应是复数，故将is改为are。

“Why not do ...”为固定句式，意为“为什么不做某事？”。故将to去掉。

本句应指专家给野营者们上课，所以野营者是“被授课”，所以应是被动式。故将giving改为given。

“a couple of...”意为几个，后边应跟名词的复数形式，意为“几个小时”故将hour改为hours。

“There is a music exchange concert that campers can give performances and plays different kinds of music from their own counties.”本句为定语从句。从句不缺少任何成分所以先行词concert后跟关系副词，而concert表示地点，故将that改为where。

本句中的从句的助动词为can，can后应跟动词原型。故将plays改为play。

“have a lot of fun”为固定搭配，意为“玩的很开心”，故将funs 改为fun。

“look forward to doing...”为固定搭配，意为“期待做...”，故在forward后加to