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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

It is clear shown that many middle school students have physical and mental problems. 68% of the students surveying have studying anxiety as well as poor eyesight too. And a larger percentage lacks sleep. 52% are short of physical exercise. 42% of the students won’t obey our parents or teachers. Personally, I think we student should balance our physical exercise and studies. Without sound body, one can’t achieve anything. However, too much attention has been paid only on studies. As a result, I suggest we are given less homework or more time for out-of-classroom activities. Only in this way can we live a happy and healthy life.

Answer 1

【答案】1. clear—clearly

2. surveying—surveyed

3. too 删掉

4. lacks—lack

5. our—their

6. student—students

7. without 后加“a”

8. on---to

9. are—be

10. or---and

【解析】1．考查副词。修饰过去分词shown，应该用副词。故clear改为clearly。

2．考查过去分词。句意：被调查的68%的学生有学习焦虑以及视力问题。students和survey之间是被动关系，所以用过去分词作定语。故surveying改为surveyed。

3．考查副词。too"也"，根据句意"68%的学生有学习焦虑症和差的视力"，不用too。故删去too。

4．考查主谓一致。主语为 a larger percentage，应该用单数谓语。故lack改为lacks。

5．考查代词。根据句意"42%的学生不服从他们的父母和老师"，应该用their。故our改为their。

6．考查同位语。student作了we的同位语，应该用复数。student改为students。

7．考查冠词。加上a，根据句意"没有一个健康的身体"，所以加上a。

8．考查介词。pay attention to sth。故on改为to。

9．考查虚拟语气。suggest后跟宾语从句，谓语动词用should+动词原形，should可以省略。故are改为be。

10．考查连词。根据句意"我们应该给与更少的作业和更多的时间"，所以用and。故or改为and。