Question

10．假如你是李华，你校即将举行一年一度的"校园书市 （a campus book fair）"活动，其目的是给同学们提供一个交换、利用图书的机会．请你用英语写信给你的加拿大笔友Mike，介绍此次活动的有关情况．
内容应包括：
1．活动目的；
2．活动内容：买书，卖书，交换图书；
3．活动意义．
Dear Mike，
How are you doing these days？
                         
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提纲作文．根据所提供的材料信息，给加拿大笔友Mike写一封信．介绍学校即将举行的一年一度的"校园书市 （a campus book fair）"活动的有关情况，．
写作时人称以第一和第二人称为主，时态以一般现在时为主．
写作要点：1．活动目的； 2．活动内容；3．活动意义．
重要短语：be aimed at sth（目的在于），have a chance to do sth（有机会做某事），make use of（利用），exchange sth with sb（和某人交换某物），be attracted by（被…吸引），motivate sb to do sth（激励某人做某事），develop reading habits（培养阅读习惯），broaden one's horizons（拓宽某人的视野）．
【高分句型一】
1．Aimed at providing a platform where students can have a chance to exchange and make use of their books，the annual campus book fair will soon be held in our school．
   此处是由过去分词短语"aimed at …"作目的状语，主句为"the annual campus book fair will soon be held in our school"，主句的主语为"the annual campus book fair"与所给动词"aim"构成逻辑上的被动关系．
【高分句型二】
2．The fair will attract a huge crowd from the entire school，who are to sell，purchase and exchange their second-hand books with their peers．
此处是由关系代词"who"引导的非限制性定语从句，主句为"The fair will attract a huge crowd from the entire school"，关系代词"who"在从句中作主语．
【高分句型三】
3．For one thing，the fair exhibits books of hundreds of types on diverse topics，motivating us to further develop our reading habits and help to broaden our horizons．
此处是由现在分词短语"motivating us to …"作伴随状语，主句为"the fair exhibits books of hundreds of types on diverse topics"，主句的主语为"the fair"与所给动词"motivate"构成逻辑上的主动关系．

解答 Dear Mike，
How are you doing these days？（开头----问候）
Aimed at providing a platform where students can have a chance to exchange and make use of their books，the annual campus book fair will soon be held in our school．【高分句型一】（活动目的）The fair will attract a huge crowd from the entire school，who are to sell，purchase and exchange their second-hand books with their peers．【高分句型二】（活动内容）
As a regular visitor，I've found myself increasingly attracted by the fair．For one thing，the fair exhibits books of hundreds of types on diverse topics，motivating us to further develop our reading habits and help to broaden our horizons．【高分句型三】For another，most books are sold at a lower price than what the bookstores offer．（活动意义）
Please let me know if you have any suggestions on how to host such a book fair better．（结尾---期待回复）
Yours，
Li Hua

点评 提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型．