Question

15．假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文．请你根据下列要点写回信．
要点：1．参加中文学习班；
2．看中文书刊、电视
3．学唱中文歌曲
4．交中国朋友
注意：1．词数100左右
2．可适当增加细节以使行文连贯
3．开头语己为你写好
June 8，2008
Dear Peter，
I'm glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well．
Here are a few suggestions．First，it is important to take a Chinese course，as you'll be able to learn from the teacher and practice with your fellow students．（高分句型一）Then，it also helps to watch TV and read books，newspapers and magazines in Chinese whenever possible．（高分句型二）
Besides，it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs，because by doing so you'll learn and remember Chinese words more easily．（高分句型三）You can also make more Chinese friends．They will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese．
Try to write to me in Chinese next time．
Best wishes，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 建议信要写出写信的原因、建议的内容及提出建议的理由和根据．理由要合情合理，语气一定要缓和．因此建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力．建议信一般采取"三段式结构"． 1．首段：建议信的开头必须指明建议的前提和事情的原委，对自己的立场作一些解释．建议信开头常用的句式和套话 ①I'm writing to express my views concerning…②Thanks for trusting me.2．中段：应围绕问题有条理、科学婉转地提出建议．注意充分考虑对方的实际情况，表达时应选择得体用语．切忌用语生硬，泛泛而谈．通常以firstly，secondly，thirdly或to begin with，then，later等顺序陈述建议．表达建议常用的句式和套话 ①I feel that it would be helpful if…②If I were you，I would…③As far as I'm concerned…④In my opinion…⑤As for me…3．尾段：简单表达希望．希望自己的建议能对对方有帮助．通常要在建议信的结尾部分阐明你所提供的劝告或建议仅供对方参考．建议信结尾常用的句式和套语 ①I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions/recommendations practical/useful/helpful．②I would be ready to discuss this matter with you in future details．
【亮点说明】这篇范文的特点是语言简洁，也不乏重点句型和语法知识：it is important to take a Chinese course，as you'll be able to learn from the teacher and practice with your fellow students．这句话用了it做形式主语和as引导的原因状语从句，it also helps to watch TV and read books，newspapers and magazines in Chinese whenever possible．这句话用了省略句，还有范文还使用了 First，Then，Besides，这样的关联词，使文章更加连贯．
First，it is important to take a Chinese course，as you'll be able to learn from the teacher and practice with your fellow students．（高分句型一）
Then，it also helps to watch TV and read books，newspapers and magazines in Chinese whenever possible．（高分句型二）
 Besides，it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs，because by doing so you'll learn and remember Chinese words more easily．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Peter，
       I'm glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well．
       Here are a few suggestions．First，it is important to take a Chinese course，as you'll be able to learn from the teacher and practice with your fellow students．（高分句型一）Then，it also helps to watch TV and read books，newspapers and magazines in Chinese whenever possible．（高分句型二）
       Besides，it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs，because by doing so you'll learn and remember Chinese words more easily．（高分句型三）You can also make more Chinese friends．They will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese．
       Try to write to me in Chinese next time．
                                                                                                                                                                                                                        Best wishes，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                            Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．