Question

【题目】目前，不少人在写作文或交流时喜欢使用网络语言。就此现象，你班最近举行了一场讨论。请根据下表的提示，客观地介绍讨论的情况及你的观点。

40%的同学认为	60%的同学认为	你的观点
1.有点荒诞，有时让人无法理解 2.违背了汉语的语法规则，对学习毫无帮助	1.幽默，使语言更生动 2.有助于表达思想	1… 2. …

荒诞ridiculous

注意：

1 对所给提示，不要简单翻译，可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。

2 词数150左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。

Nowadays, with the development of the Internet, there came a kind of language called Web Language. _______________________________________________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】Nowadays, with the development of the Internet, there has come a kind of language called Web Language. Recently, our class has held a discussion on whether it’s good for students to use Web Language when writing compositions or communication. Students’ opinions on this matter vary from person to person.

40% of the students are not in favor of the idea of using Web Language, thinking it ridiculous to see or hear words which are not commonly used in our daily life. Worse still, it’s hard for them to make themselves understood. In their opinion, it is against Chinese grammar, and it’s not beneficial to students’ studies.

However, the rest of the students, accounting for60%, are fond of it. They hold the opinion that what they say sounds humorous, which makes the language more lively. Moreover, it is of special help for them to express themselves freely.

【反】Personally, it is a phenomenon worth thinking about. I don’t think it good to use Web Language. It may be fashionable as some may think, but it may also make our meanings confusing, leaving other people at a loss.

【正】As far as I’m concerned, in our contemporary society, it’s quite common especially for us teenagers to use Web language when chatting with others. It’s convenient for us to express our feelings. However, when it comes to some formal situation such as writing compositions, it is not appropriate for us to use it.

【解析】写作背景：目前不少人在写作文或交流时喜欢使用网络语言，就此现象，你班最近举行了一场讨论。请根据下表的提示，客观地介绍讨论的情况及你的观点。介绍观点主要用一般现在时来写，主要分四部分：第一部分交代班里进行了在写作文或交流时喜欢使用网络语言是否对学生有好处的讨论。第二部分40%的同学认为1.有点荒诞，有时让人无法理解2.违背了汉语的语法规则，对学习毫无帮助。第三部分60%的同学认为1.幽默，使语言更生动2.有助于表达思想。第三部分发表自己对此的观点。

写作时要注意要点全面，表达准确，条理清晰，观点明确。还要注意高级词汇和句型的运用来增加文章的亮点。如宾语从句whether it’s good for students to use Web Language,定语从句which are not commonly used in our daily life.和which makes the language more lively.it作形式主语it’s hard for them to make themselves understood.和It’s convenient for us to express our feelings.同位语从句that what they say sounds humorous, it作形式宾语I don’t think it good to use Web Language.词语vary from person to person. in favor of, be beneficial to, be of help, worth thinking.连接词Worse still, In their opinion, However, Moreover, Personally, As far as I’m concerned等。