Question

学校英语学习俱乐部正在进行以“我最喜欢的乐队”为题的征文比赛。西域男孩(Westlife)是深受大众欢迎的爱尔兰男子乐队，请根据下列表格提示完成你的参赛作品。

 

乐队名称	西域男孩(Westlife)
成员	由五位英俊男孩组成
历史	●1998年组建 ●在爱尔兰、英国走红 ●在非洲、澳大利亚、亚洲受欢迎 ●1999-2005年间，制作13张唱片，在英国排名第一 ●4千万张唱片在世界范围内销售 ●2012年解散
喜欢该乐队原因	●被Seasons in the Sun这首歌打动，它诠释了真爱的含义 ●……

注意：

1．词数不少于60词。

2．对所给要点逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。

3．文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。

 

Answer 1

【答案】

不唯一

Westlife is an Irish boy band.It has set many records in European music history and enjoys a high reputation all over the world—that is“the greatest boy band ever in history”.This fantastic band was made up of five shining guys in 1998.

Because of their handsome appearance and terrific singing,they got popular in Irish and Britain.Soon they are welcomed in Africa,Austrain and Asia.Between soon 1999 and 2005, Westlife made 13 records,standing  first on the top list in Britain.They geartly succeeded in singjing their wonderful songs.As a result,40 million albums were sold out all over the world.Personally,I was deeply touched by one of their fabulous songs“Seasons in the Sun”.This is the number one single which interprets the true meaning of love!

Although they broke up in 2012 after almost 14 years together,the guys’perseverance in chasing their dreams and fighting for their musical career gave me a strong positive push!

【解析】

试题分析：英语写作是一种创作性的学习过程。启动知识信息储存，构思立意，谋篇布局，遣词造句，对语言表达的正确性和准确性、思维的逻辑性和文章的条理性都比口语要求更高。先审题，弄清写作要求，审题是写好作文的前提，理清思路，确定体裁、框架结构和内容。提醒考生注意时态及语态的使用。这篇短文有些意义的表达考生不好找到合适的单词和短语，这就反映了考生的词汇量的大小了。

考点：提纲作文。

点评：加强积累适量的词汇、词组和增加各种类型句子的运用。把握好各种句型和词汇的搭配，并从各类题材和体裁着手，思考内容的连贯性，语言和句子的准确性。会使用连接词或过渡句使句子的连接起来，读起来流畅。