Question

【题目】假定你是李华，收到好友王林的电子邮件，说他在英语学习上用功不少，但是效果不好，他想放弃英语学习。请你根据以下内容回复王林，劝他不要放弃英语学习。

1. 要对自己有信心（have confidence in）；

2. 与英语学习好的同学交朋友；

3. 进步时奖励自己。

注意：1.词数100左右

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Wang Lin,

I am sorry to learn that you don’t do well in English.

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Wang Lin,

I’m sorry to learn that you don’t do well in English. I’d like to give you my advice on learning English.

First of all, you should have confidence in yourself, which is very important to English learning. Secondly, you’d better make friends with the students who are good at English and they are very likely to help you. Thirdly, learning English well is a long process. Remember: reward yourself when you have made progress, which will inspire you greatly. Anyway, you mustn’t give up learning English. Believe in yourself. Where there’s a will, there’s a way.

Hope my suggestions will work.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】【试题分析】

本文针对收信人王林学习英语方面的困惑这个话题提出建议和忠告。第一段首先提出建议的原因引入建议，第二段建议的具体内容。第三段写客气话。首尾呼应。注意时态常用一般现在时和一般将来时。写作时注意适当地增加细节，恰当地使用连接过渡词，以使行文连贯。另外，要注意时态、语态的合理运用。

【亮点说明】

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