Question

13．请阅读下列短文，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章．
请观察所给的图画并根据你对该图画的理解写一篇英语短文，内容包括：
（1）简要描述图片，并说明该图片所揭露的现象；
（2）分析造成该现象的原因（至少两点）；
（3）提出自己的看法．
要求：1．词数150左右．开头已经给出，不计入词数．
2．文章中不得提及考生所在学校及本人姓名．
The Internet has long been regarded as a wonderful tool that allows students to gain insight to useful resources and information．However，this is not always the case．______________________________

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇漫画作文，让我们根据对图画的理解写一篇英语短文，这需要我们发挥英语思维，将提供的信息用英语完整流畅的表达出来．写作需要用第三人称，时态主要是一般现在时，内容要点包括：简要描述图片，并说明该图片所揭露的现象；分析造成该现象的原因（至少两点）；提出自己的看法．我们此篇作文分为三部分，第一部分为简要描述图片，并说明该图片所揭露的现象．第二部分为分析造成该现象的原因．第三部分为提出自己的看法
重点短语与句型：
be  happy with 对…满意
depend on  依靠，依赖
make  use of利用
account for 解释，说明…的原因
 take measures to do sth 采取措施做某事
高分句型一：There are many reasons accounting for this phenonmenon．此句用了现在分词短语作后置定语
高分句型二：Firstly，it is vital that students gain confidence in themselves and their abilities while doing tasks．此句it is vital that 从句用虚拟语气，that 可省略．
高分句型三：Besides，what teachers and parents should do is encourage students to be creative．此句是what引导的主语从句．

解答 The Internet has long been regarded as a wonderful tool that allows students to gain insight to useful resources and information．However，this is not always the case．As is vividly shown in the picture，a boy is happy with the fact that he can depend on the Internet to finish tasks without any difficulty．It mirrors a common phenomenon．Nowadays，students tend to make use of the Internet to gain information they need．（简要描述图片，并说明该图片所揭露的现象）
　　　There are many reasons accounting for this phenonmenon．（高分句型一） To begin with，students find it convenient to surf the Internet for useful information，where problems can be solved with the help of several clicks．What's more，there's no doubt that the pressure to succeed also causes students to turn to computers for accurate answers．As a result，it's likely that students will lose interest in studying，which is not beneficial to their overall development．（分析造成该现象的原因）
　　　In my opinion，measures must be taken to solve the problem．Firstly，it is vital that students gain confidence in themselves and their abilities while doing tasks．（高分句型二） Besides，what teachers and parents should do is encourage students to be creative．（ 高分句型三）Finally，doing tasks independently is of great significance．（提出自己的看法）

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实 的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．