Question

假设你参加所在年级的英文写作比赛，请根据下图和提示完成一篇短文：
1.点明主题；
2.联系实际，谈谈出现此现象的原因及解决办法。
注意：开头已给出，不计入词数；词数不少于120个；
提示词：蜗牛snail 交通拥挤  heavy traffic
 
From the picture we can see two snails are joking about the cars which are moving very slowly on the crowded roads._                                 
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Answer 1

From the picture we can see two snails are joking about the cars which are moving very slowly on the crowded roads. This humorous picture isn’t just to amuse us but actually shows us one of the most serious problems, that is, heavy traffic.
But why does this happen? I think several factors contribute to this phenomenon. Firstly, more and more cars are coming into common families, which causes serious traffic jams. Secondly, with the population and cars increasing, although the government puts much money on building or repairing roads every year, the quality of the roads is not satisfactory. What’s worse, some public transportation still remains unimproved. Thirdly, some people lack awareness of traffic regulations, which is an obstacle to the flow of traffic.
In my opinion, the number of private cars should be put under control. Meanwhile, the government should take some measures to improve some public transportation. What’s more, people must obey traffic regulations strictly. Only when our whole society work together to solve all these problems can we speed up the flow of traffic in the cities.

本文是一篇看图作文，对学生的要求比较高，要求学生简述图片并筛选出要点，分析交通拥挤的原因并提出解决的方法。交通拥堵的原因在于车多，路窄，司机不守规则等。解决方法：政府改善公共交通，人们必须遵守交通规则。写作时一定要先把要点列出，然后再逐一翻译成英语。可以使用一些较高级的词汇和句型，再多使用一些连接成分，使文章更流畅。