Question

【题目】请以“ The Biggest Challenge I’ve Ever Met” 为题写一篇120词左右的短文，记述自己遭遇过的最大的挑战。内容包括：

1. 简要记述事情经过；

2. 你的感受或从中获得的启示。

注意：1.短文的标题和开头已给出（不计入总词数）；

2. 文中不能出现考生真实姓名及任何透露考生身份信息的内容。

The Biggest Challenge I’ve Ever Met

In our daily life, we unavoidably come across various challenges now and then.

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Answer 1

【答案】

The Biggest Challenge I’ve Ever Met

In our daily life, we unavoidably come across various challenges now and then.

The biggest challenge in my life happened when I entered senior high school. I was shocked to find what the physics teacher taught was totally beyond me and I lost my confidence completely. Thinking I just lacked the gift for physics, I stopped making efforts and my grades were poor. Fortunately, my teacher didn’t give up on me. Instead, she helped me analyze my problem and I realized I needed to rise to challenges bravely. I regained my confidence, adjusted my approaches and worked hard. Now I’m one of the top students in physics.

From the above experience, I’ve learned that it is not our inborn gifts but our efforts that help us achieve success. When confronted with challenges, we should fight bravely instead of giving up.

【解析】

试题分析：本篇书面表达属于记叙文，根据提示信息，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。本文写作时先记叙事情，再表达感受。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般过去时。 4.注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种句式和结构。比如when I entered senior high school是时间状语从句；what the physics teacher taught 是名词性从句；还有强调句I’ve learned that it is not our inborn gifts but our efforts that help us achieve success.。此外，文章还使用了大量短语 now and then，make efforts，give up on me,等；副词 unavoidably, completely, totally, fortunately, bravely的使用，使文章内容更具有层次感，也使语言更加连贯。