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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

These day, people break traffic rules and littered everywhere. It does serious harm with our life. I think people should make a effort to change this situation.

As for him, I will bear traffic rules in mind. If I ride a bike, I’ll never cross a road until the traffic light turn green. If I walk, I will forget to use the zebra crossing. Meanwhile, I will make it as my duty to help keep our environment clean or healthy. I will help clean up the roadside litter whenever possibly. I hope my behavior will make a difference.

Answer 1

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【解析】1.day改为days

考查名词复数。根据前面的these 可知day要用复数，故用days.

2.littered改为litter

考查谓语动词。people break traffic rules and litter everywhere .break 和 litter是并列的谓语动词，故也要用一般现在时。主语是people，故.littered改为litter

3.with改为to

考查固定搭配。do harm to …对……造成伤害。故.with改为to。

4.a改为an

考查不定冠词。名词effort是元音开头的，要用不定冠词an.,故a改为an。

5.him改为me

考查人称代词。从As for him, I will bear traffic rules in mind.中可知，主语是我，所以him要改为me.

6.turn 改为turns

考查谓语动词。本句子I’ll never cross a road until the traffic light turn green.中的turn的主语是the traffic light，是单数，故要用turns.

7.添加never/not

考查否定句。上文：至于我，我会记住交通规则的。如果我骑自行车，直到交通灯变成绿色，我才过马路。可推断出“如果我步行，我决不会忘记走斑马线”因此要用否定式。故添加never/not.

8.删去as

考查连词。Meanwhile, I will make it as my duty to help keep our environment clean本句中it是形式宾语，真正的宾语是后面的动词不定式，所以as 是多余的，故要删去as。句意：我会尽我的责任来帮助保持我们的环境清洁。

9.or 改 为 and

考查并列连词。是保持环境的清洁和健康。是并列关系。故要or 改 为 and

10.possibly改为possible

考查形容词。I will help clean up the roadside litter whenever（it is ）possibly只要有可能，我就帮忙清理路边的垃圾。从句意可知whenever从句中省略了it is ,possible作从句的表语，故possibly改为possible。