Question

假定你是某中学生英语报的小记者，以下漫画内容是你的所见所闻,谙根据要求写一篇英语短文投稿。
内容要求：
1.描述漫画内容；2.发表个人感想。

Answer 1

Mind Your Behavior in Public Places
Last Sunday, I went sightseeing with my friends in the Fairy Lake Park. The park was full of freshness and beauty of spring, with the sun shining and birds singing. When I was enjoying the fantastic scenery around, something unpleasant caught my eye. A young couple in a boat were eating, talking and laughing loudly as if they were the only people in the world. What’s worse, they spat and even threw rubbish into the lake, totally ignoring the noticeable sign,“No Littering”nearby. What a shame!
Such behavior left me deep in thought. If all visitors to the Fairy Lake do as the couple did, the lake will be severely polluted and soon turned into a huge dustbin. I think all of us should mind our behavior in public places. Only in this way can we live in more comfortable and beautiful surroundings.

本文考查看图作文。首先考生要看懂图的中心思想。不能出现审题方面的偏差。本文仍然是关于在公众场合注意自己的言行举止，先描写图画的内容，再说明图画表示的内涵，结合实际谈谈自己的感想，看图作文对考生的要求较高，首先要读懂图形，要求考生筛选出要点或者中心思想，然后再把要点用连接词串联成文。象what’s more等，写作时要使用高级的词汇或者句型让文章更有文采。使意思表达清楚，A young couple in a boat were eating, talking and laughing loudly as if they were the only people in the world.这句话既用到了非谓语动词也用到了as if接从句。