Question

【题目】假如你是高三一班李华，看到了学校学生会近期要举办成人礼仪式(Adult Ceremony)的一则招募志愿者启事，你非常感兴趣，请根据要点给学生会李老师写一封应征邮件。要点包括：

1. 你的相关特长（组织能力，创造力等）

2. 你对成人礼仪式的认识。

注意： 1. 词数100左右。2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Mr. Li,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

One Possible Version

Dear Mr. Li,

I’m Li Hua, a student from Class 1, Grade 3. I’m writing to apply to be a volunteer in the coming Adult Ceremony.

First of all, I am convinced that I am well qualified for the job. I am skilled at organizing activities as well as communicating with others and I have the ability to deal with emergencies. Besides, I am highly creative, which is of vital importance to this activity. As far as I am concerned, Adult Ceremony is of great significance to all of the students. Not only can it raise students’ sense of responsibility, but also it can make it possible for us to be partially independent of our parents. What’s more, students can learn to express their gratitude to their teachers as well as their parents.

In conclusion, I would appreciate it if I am admitted as a volunteer in the Adult Ceremony. Thank you for considering my application.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：本文要求一封应征邮件，应征成人礼仪式的志愿者。写作时注意以下几点：1.涵盖所有内容。2、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时，以第一称为主。3、注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。

【亮点说明】文章使用了非常好的短语和句子给文章增色，如宾语从句I am convinced that I am well qualified for the job.；非限制性定语从句I am highly creative, which is of vital importance to this activity.；部分倒装Not only can it raise students’ sense of responsibility…；deal with处理，解决；As far as I am concerned就我而言；as well as以及，和；In conclusion总的来说；还有First of all，Besides，What’s more等有效地使语句间连接紧凑。