Question

现在越来越多的人选择在网上找工作。请你就此现象以“Hunting for a Job on the Internet”为题，写一篇100词左右的英语短文，发表自己的看法。内容包括：

1．人们宁愿在网上找工作而不愿选择传统的方法；

2．在网上找工作的原因：

(1)方便 (2)简单( 3)失败也不会难堪

3．你对在网上找工作的看法。

Answer 1

Hunting for a Job on the Internet

Nowadays more and more people would rather look for a job on the Internet than in the newspapers or in a job market. There are many reasons for their preference, one of which is that a job hunter can find a job conveniently without bothering to get recommendations from relatives or friends, or registration at an employment exchange. Besides, a job hunter can get a job by simply browsing among the ads online and sending resumes by e?mails. Finally, the success rate is very high, and even if one fails to find a job, it can spare him the embarrassment of being refused.

As for me, I believe that with the increasing popularity of the Internet, this new way will win favor among more and more jobless people and laid?off workers for its convenience, efficiency and high success rate.

【解析】

试题分析：本次作文是个提纲作文，要点要求详尽。因为描述的是现阶段的一现象，故基本时态应定为一般现在时。又因为写作要点涉及到：现象、原因及看法，这三个主要方面，故考生应逻辑清晰、主次分明地将要点铺陈开来。

亮点说明：该范文时态使用正确，要点全面，写作思路清晰——先概括现象，再详细分析其原因，最后表明自己的观点，且详略得当。此外，该考生注意语句的衔接，“Besides”, “Finally”，“As for me,”的使用恰到好处。而用语的地道和高级句式的合理运用，例如：“would rather… than…”，“by simply browsing … and sending …”，定语从句“…one of which…”也使得文章锦上添花。