Question

第二节：书面表达

假设你将作为新华中学高三毕业生代表，请根据以下要点在毕业晚会上用英文作一个告别演讲:

1．感谢家人，朋友和老师。特别举例感谢某个老师（不用真名，一律使用Mr. Zheng），并写出原因。

2．回顾高中三年的生活。列举出你印象深刻的活动。

3．展望未来。

注意：开头与结尾已经给出，所写部分120字左右。

Dear teachers, families and graduates, welcome and thank you for joining us tonight at Xnhua High School graduation ceremony for the Class of 2010!

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Finally, best wishes to the Class of 2010．Thank you very much.

Answer 1

Possible version：

Dear teachers, families and graduates, welcome and thank you for joining us tonight at Xinhua High School graduation ceremony for the Class of 2010!

First, let me thank all our families and friends for their love and support on behalf of the graduates. I also want to thank our diligent teachers for guiding us through to this moment. My personal thanks to Mr Zheng, you got me through Math when I had given up hope.

Graduation is a time to go over enjoyable memories which have been made over the past three years. Many events become so vivid in my mind at this moment, military training, soccer and basketball games.

However, graduation is also a time to look forward to the future in front of us. No matter what you plan next, I hope you can go about it positively. Each of you will create your own unique path. Let’s remember the saying “attitude determines altitude”. Please always keep a smile on your face.

Finally, best wishes to the Class of 2010．Thank you very much.

解析:

1、本文是一个演讲稿，属于提纲类作文。写作材料贴近学生生活，能够给学生较大的发挥空间。

2、写作过程中要用恰当的句型来表达上述三个三个方面的内容。

3、注意要考虑运用恰当的过渡性词语。