Question

假如你们学校“英语爱好者俱乐部”将对“节约资源，爱我校园 Save Resources and Love Our School”这一话题进行讨论。请根据下列提示，用英语写一篇发言稿。内容要点应包括：
1. 描述校园里存在的浪费现象；
2. 谈谈这些浪费现象的不良影响；
3. 倡议节约资源，从我做起。（至少两点建议）
注意：1.发言稿必须包括所有内容要点，可适当发挥；
2.词数：100左右。
Dear Friends,                                                                                 
                                                                                            
                                                                                            
                                                                                            
                                                                                            
                                                                                            
That’s all. Thank you.

Answer 1

Dear Friends,
Very often we come across an empty classroom with lights still on. It’s not difficult to find evidence of wasting water. Additionally, some throw away the soft drink bottles, used exercise papers and books, which should be recycled. Worse still, others use non-environmental lunch boxes, causing “White Pollution”.
These phenomena show that many students lack the sense of environmental awareness, which is dangerous. If these continue, like the saying, “The last drops of water will be our tears!”
As for me, first I must help educate my schoolmates to be more environmentally friendly. Then we can start from doing some small things, such as collecting used items for recycling, turning off the lights, saving water. Always remember our responsibilities, and “Your contribution counts!”
That’s all. Thank you.

解析试题分析：题目要求根据话题“Save Resources and Love Our School”写一篇发言稿。写作要点已经列出，看牙医分三部分来写，第一部分描述浪费现象；第二部分写浪费现象的不良影响；第三部分给出自己的建议。写作时注意句与句、段与段的衔接，多使用一些连接词；使用一些高级词汇，定语从句、非谓语动词等语法知识。另外，注意人称、时态、拼写和标点的正确使用。
亮点说明：
范文使用了短语come across, throw away, such as等；
语法方面，范文使用了：with复合结构with lights still on；固定句型It’s not difficult to find...；定语从句which should be recycled和which is dangerous；非谓语动词causing “White Pollution”；宾语从句These phenomena show that...；条件状语从句If these continue等，做到了语法知识的灵活运用；
范文使用Very often, Additionally, Worse still, As for me来衔接上下文，做到了语意连贯；
范文使用some...others..., first,then, such as表示列举，使范文调理清晰。
考点：材料类作文