Question

【题目】假定你是李华，美国一所友好学校正在你校选拔优秀学生到美国进行为期两周的交流学习，你对此很感兴趣。请根据提示内容，给Mr. Blair写一封自荐信。

1. 自身优势；

2. 希望获准。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Mr. Blair,

My name is Li Hua. I have heard that you are selecting students from our school to learn in your school for two weeks. I’m interested in it and I am writing to introduce myself.

I’ve been learning English for five years and I won the first prize in the English speaking contest this year. Besides, I’m quite skillful in organizing activities. Moreover, Pm always ready to help others. I’m willing to study hard and have a good cooperation with other students.

I would appreciate it if I could get the opportunity. I do hope I can be accepted. Looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours

Li Hua

【解析】本文书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封书信。

第1步：根据提示可知，本篇是一封书信：美国一所友好学校正在你校选拔优秀学生到美国进行为期两周的交流学习，你对此很感兴趣。请根据提示内容，给Mr. Blair写一封自荐信。1. 自身优势；2. 希望获准。

第2步：根据写作要求确定关键词，如：selecting students from our school（从我们学校选学生）；introduce myself.（自我介绍）；won the first prize in the English speaking contest（在英语演讲比赛中获得一等奖）；have a good cooperation with（与---有一个好的合作）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态语态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。

【亮点说明】

本文是一封书信，格式正确，内容齐全，结构布局合理，文中使用高级句子。I have heard that you are selecting students from our school to learn in your school for two weeks.句中使用that引导的宾语从句；I would appreciate it if I could get the opportunity.运用if条件句的固定用法；I do hope I can be accepted.强调谓语运用巧妙。