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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（/\)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\ )划掉。

注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词； 2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分

Life is not easy for any of us. We will unavoidably suffered bitterness and sadness from failure. Thus, there is very important for us to have a good mood in our daily life. If you have a good mood, you will be happy with everything in the world. Most important, you will have an optimistic effect at the people around you. We all will live harmonious and happy life. It is good for our health as well.

However, sometimes when you meet some difficulties, when you quarrel with others, but when you fail in doing nothing, you may have a bad mood. If so, you should get rid of it as soon as possibly. As we all know, every coin has two sides. So you should think more about its bright side. We are sure that everything will be better with time passed by.

Remember: only you can make himself happy.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】suffered→suffer

【2】there→it

【3】important→importantly

【4】at→on

【5】在live之后加a

【6】but→or

【7】nothing→something

【8】possibly→possible

【9】passed→passing

【10】himself→yourself

【解析】

试题分析：生活对我们任何一个人来说都不容易。记住：只有自己才能使自己开心。

【1】suffered→suffer 助动词will后面用动词原形，故把suffered改为suffer。

【2】there→it 此处不是there be句型，而是it作形式主语，动词不定式作真正的主语，故把there改为it。

【3】important→importantly 副词修饰整个句子，故把important改为importantly。

【4】at→on 固定词组：have an effect on sth.对……产生影响，故把at改为on。

【5】在live之后加a 固定形式：live a...life，表示“过着……的生活”。故在live之后加a。

【6】but→or 句意：当你和别人争吵或做某事失败时，你会有一个坏的情绪。故把but 改为 or。

【7】nothing→something 句意：失败做某事。故把nothing 改为 something。

【8】possibly→possible as ...as possible尽可能……。故把possibly改为 possible。

【9】passed→passing with的独立主格结构，time与pass是主动关系，故把passed 改为passing。

【10】himself→yourself 句意：只有你才能使你自己开心。故把himself改为 yourself。

【知识拓展】

1.with ＋名词（代词）＋现在分词

She stood there chatting with her friend, with her child playing beside her．她站在那儿跟朋友闲聊，孩子在旁边玩。

2.with ＋名词（代词）＋过去分词

The goalkeeper left Japan with his flaws laid bare．这位守门员离开了日本，而他的缺点却暴露无遗。3. 3.with ＋名词（代词）＋不定式

With 10 minutes to go, you’d better hurry．还有十分钟，你最好快一点。

With you to lead us, our group is sure to succeed．有你领导我们，我们组肯定能成功。