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That afternoon,on my way to home from school,the north wind was blowing hard and soon sky began to snow. It was freezing cold and I thought I must hurry up. The road was very wet that I suddenly hit a roadside tree. When I knew it,I fall off my bike and down into the river. I was struggling for life in the cold water. All of a sudden I felt being pulled up by a strong hand below. It was a PLA man,who was just about passing by,that had saved me from drowned. With tears coming into my eye,I said ,“Thank you,Uncle!I really don't know how to say. Without your help,what would have happened to me?”

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V . That afternoon,on my way tp home from school,the north wind was blowing hard and soon sky (it) began to snow. It was freezing cold and I thought 1 must hurry up. The road was very (so) wet that I suddenly hit a roadside tree. When (Before) I knew it,I fall (fell) ,off my bike and down into the river. I was struggling for life in the cold water. All of a sudden I felt being pulled (pushed) up by a strong hand below. It was a PLA man,who was just about passing by,that had saved me from being drowned. With tears coming into my eye (eyes) ,I said, “Thank you,Uncle!I really don't know how (what) to say.Without your help,what would have happened to me?”