Question

7．假设你是李华．你的英国笔友John写信告诉你近日他由于沉迷于电脑游戏，健康受到很大影响．他十分焦虑．请你根据以下要点提示，给他写一封回信，建议他养成良好的生活习惯．要点如下：
1．限制玩游戏的时间，把精力逐渐转移到其他事情上；
2．规定起床和睡觉的时间，形成良好的作息习惯；
3．每天锻炼半小时，增强体质．
注意：1．词数120左右；2．开头已给出，不计入总词数．
Dear John，
I'm sorry to hear that you're addicted to computer games which have had a bad influence on your health．
             ．
Yours sincerely，

Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 根据要点写一封回信，首先要明确要点所涉及的信息及关系，其次注意恰当的使用关联词，例如，firstly，secondly，thirdly或是比较复杂的，像是to begin with，then，finally．再次，句式的选择．借助从句的应用，让阅卷人感觉应试者有较为深厚的语法功底和极好的语言表现力．
【亮点说明】
如要点中"限制玩游戏的时间"可以处理成you should limit the time that you spend playing computer games，"规定起床和睡觉的时间，形成良好的作息习惯；"可以处理成 you should get up and go to bed at a specific time so that you can form a habit of getting up and going to bed regularly．以上均是借助从句的应用，显示出作者扎实的写作功底．

解答 Dear John，
    I'm sorry to hear that you've addicted to computer games which have had a bad influence on your health．I know you worry about it very much．As a good friend，I'm willing to give you some advice．（写信开头）
    Firstly，you should limit the time that you spend playing computer games and pay more attention to other things．（高分句型一）Secondly，you should get up and go to bed at a specific time so that you can form a habit of getting up and going to bed regularly．（高分句型二）Thirdly，you should do exercise for about half an hour every day to strengthen your body．I do hope you can get rid of computer games and form a healthy lifestyle．（提出建议）
                                                                                                                                  Best wishes!
                                                                                                                             Yours sincerely，
                                                                                                                                         Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．