Question

【题目】假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Jack发来邮件说他被哈佛大学(Harvard University)录取了。请你用英语给他写一封电子邮件，要点包括:

1.表达祝贺;

2.介绍你的学习情况;

3.寻求建议。

注意:1.词数100左右

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Jack，

I am delighted to know that you've been admitted into Harvard University. You have been working hard for this over the past years and your efforts have finally paid off. Congratulations!

To be honest, I plan to study at one of China’s top universities when I graduate from high school. I have prepared for a long time. However, with the college entrance exams drawing near, I suddenly find myself losing confidence and feeling afraid that I might fail.

Have you ever doubted yourself too? I would appreciate it if you would give me some advice on how to deal with my present situation. I am looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

这是一篇应用文写作。

第1步：根据提示可知, 本篇为一封电子邮件；假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Jack发来邮件说他被哈佛大学(Harvard University)录取了。请你用英语给他写一封电子邮件，要点包括:1.表达祝贺;2.介绍你的学习情况;3.寻求建议。

第2步：根据写作要求, 确定关键词（组）, 如：be delighted to（高兴）；be admitted into（被录取）；pay off（回报）；prepare for（为……准备）；the college entrance exams（高考）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句, 注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文, 注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡, 书写一定要规范清晰, 保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。