Question

【题目】书面表达

根据下面提示写一篇英语短文介绍肢体语言。

肢体语言的作用（如传递信息等）；

明白在不同文化中肢体语言的重要性；

你对肢体语言的看法。

注意：1. 词数100左右,标题已给出；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使内容充实、行文连贯；

3. 短文中不能出现与本人相关的信息。

Body Language

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Answer 1

【答案】

Body Language

Body language is used by people for sending messages to one another. It is helpful because it can help make you easily understood. When you are talking with others, you are not just using words, but also using expressions and body movements.

Different countries have different body language. When you use a foreign language, it is important to know the meaning of gestures and movements in the foreign countries. Using body language in a correct way will help communicate with people and make the stay in a foreign country easy and comfortable.

In a word, I think that it is important in our lives to learn and use body language.

【解析】

试题分析：本次作文要求根据提示写一篇英语短文介绍肢体语言。要点包括：1.肢体语言的作用（如传递信息等）；2.明白在不同文化中肢体语言的重要性；3.你对肢体语言的看法。故既要完成任务，又要兼顾形式的要求。

写作亮点：本篇条理清楚，要点全面，结构连贯。其句式上的变化既使得文章生动而流畅，也体现了作者驾驭句式的能力。例如：状语从句because it can help make you easily understood.和宾语从句that it is important in our lives to learn and use body language.的使用，以及非谓语动词做主语Using body language in a correct way的运用。另外还有一些好的连词，如：not just…but also…, in a word等等。