Question

【题目】 书面表达

假定你是李华， 暑假你参加了英国游学活动，住在房东Tricia家中， 回国后给房东写一封信表示感谢， 要点如下：

1、安全抵家

2、回顾英国游学体会

3、感谢房东的帮助

4、附寄两张合影

5、表达愿望

注意：1、词数100左右。

2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

3、结束语已为你写好。

Dear Tricia,

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Looking forward to your reply.

Yours

LiHua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Tricia,

I’ve come back home safely . Looking back to my stay in Britain, I felt so happy and satisfied. The beautiful scenery and friendly people impressed me a lot . I also benefited a lot from learning together with local students. More importantly , your help and kindness made it easier for me to have a better understanding of British cultural adapt to the life there . So I’m so grateful to you .

By the way , attached to the letter are two photos taken with you , which I believe will remind you of the happy time we spent together.

You are expected to come to China soon.

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：这篇文章属于提纲式要点作文，要求学生就所给内容写一封感谢信，是学生比较熟悉的题材，体现了英语学习应该注意实用性，生活型的原则。应注意下面几点：1）注意人称，应该用第一人称的形式给房东（第二人称）写感谢信；2）注意时态的正确使用：从试题的内容上可以看出在表达要点1和2时应用过去时；而其他要点则需要注意时态的替换。3）注意恰当使用逻辑词语，是各个要点间逻辑连贯，行文通顺。提纲类书面表达不是简单的逐条翻译，而是将所给的几个要点合理的组成比较通顺的语句，因此要仔细组织语言，合理安排结构。在语言方面，要特别注意简洁明了，开头要开门见山。

【亮点说明】文章使用了很好的短语和句子：Looking back to回顾，impress，benefited a lot from doing受益匪浅，have a better understanding o更好的掌握，adapt to，be grateful to感激，By the way顺便，attached to附带，remind of，which I believe will remind you of the happy time we spent together是一句定语从句。