Question

12．今天是3月19日，星期五，外教Johnson先生在课堂上讲了如何提高英语写作能力．
请根据以下建议，结合你的看法写一篇日记上交Johnson先生．
1．熟练掌握部分词汇；2．适当背诵一些美文；3．坚持每天练习写作．
注意：1．词数120-150；2．可适当增加细节．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇开放式作文，写作时不仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文．需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合给出的开头，不能出现文章脱节问题．尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．
亮点句型一：English writing is becoming more and more important in daily communication as well as in the examination，which is well worth fixing our attention on．
英语写作在日常交流和考试中都变得越来越重要，这是值得我们注意的．which is well worth fixing our attention on是一个非限制性定语从句，which指代主句的内容．
亮点句型二：Of course，it's necessary and useful for us to read or even recite more English beautiful articles，because we have to input before outputting．当然，阅读和背诵更多漂亮的英语文章是必要而且有用的，因为我们必须在输出之前输入．本句中because we have to input before outputting是一个原因状语从句，在主句中it为形式主语，真正的主语是动词不定式to read or even recite more English beautiful articles．

解答 March 19，FridayFine
     Today Mr．Johnson，our English teacher，told us how to improve English writing．English writing is becoming more and more important in daily communication as well as in the examination，which is well worth fixing our attention on．（亮点句型一）
     In order to write a good English composition，we should，as  Mr．Johnson said，have an excellent command of more than 2，000 frequently used English words．Words are the basis of a language．Of course，it's necessary and useful for us to read or even recite more English beautiful articles，because we have to input before outputting．（亮点句型二）Besides，as the saying goes，practice makes perfect．We should take advantage of all of chances to write English both in class and out of class，that is，write while listening，speaking，reading，even thinking．
    Keeping a diary every day is a good way to improve our English writing．Let's hold on．

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．