Question

【题目】短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

My birthday is coming. Father asked me how I would want as my birthday present. I told him I need no present but a party. Father said OK. When I recited the name of my seven friends I planned to invite, he wondered why his guest list did not include my new neighbor Tom. I told him about that I didn’t like to be with a person whom I didn’t know well. And father insisted that I should seize the chance to make new friends. In my birthday, Tom came including my seven friends. Very quick we became good friends. From this I realized give others a chance means giving myself a chance. It was a really forgettable birthday.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】how → what

【2】need → needed

【3】name → names

【4】his → my

【5】去掉about

【6】And → But

【7】In → On

【8】quick → quickly

【9】give → giving

【10】forgettable → unforgettable

【解析】

试题分析： 通过本文的阅读和改错，考查学生的固定搭配和时态和非谓语动词的用法、连词、冠词的区别等。

【1】how → what 考查宾语从句的连接词。how I would want做ask的宾语，want需要一个宾语，用what，how是副词，常做方式状语。

【2】need → needed 考查动词的一致性。told后的宾语从句和主句时态一致，前面是过去式，这里也应该用动词的过去式needed。

【3】name → names 考查名词的数。这里的意思是：7个朋友的名字。name是可数名词，当然应该用它的复数形式names。

【4】his → my 考查代词。he wondered why his guest list did not include my new neighbor Tom.的意思是：他想知道为什么我的客人名单里没有我的新邻居Tom，所以代词应该是my。

【5】去掉about 考查动词。tell somebody something。告诉某人某事。about that I didn’t like to be with a person whom I didn’t know well.是宾语从句，about没用，应该去掉。

【6】And → But 考查并列连词。我不想邀请不熟悉的人，但是父亲坚持要我抓住结交朋友的机会。and表递进，而本句前后表转折，所以用But。

【7】In → On 考查介词。这里的意思是：在生日那一天。在具体的某一天用On。

【8】quick → quickly 考查副词。 这里用副词修饰全文，意思是：我们很快成为朋友。所以quick → quickly。

【9】give → giving 考查非谓语动词。分析句子give others a chance means giving myself a chance.可知，give others a chance是主语，而动词不能做主语，应该用动词-ing做主语，和后面的宾语giving myself a chance一致，所以give → giving。

【10】forgettable → unforgettable 考查语境的理解。这是一个难忘的生日。forgettable 的意思是：健忘的；unforgettable的意思是：难忘的。所以forgettable → unforgettable。