Question

【题目】假定你是李华，你的英国好友Josh想了解你校学生课外活动开展情况。请你给他回信，内容应包括：

1.课外活动的意义；

2.课外活动的内容；

3.你最喜欢的课外活动及原因。

注意： 1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Josh,

Learning that you are interested in our school activities, I'd like to tell you some details.

To enrich students' school life and improve learning quality, our school provides us with varied and colorful after-class activities. We are encouraged to participate in such competitions as English speech and English dubbing, in which our interest and talent are fully developed.

Among all the activities, what pleases me most was visiting a packaging factory last year. I learned about the whole process of producing a cardboard box. It was also because of this experience that I understood the real meaning of labor creating life.

Could you tell me your school activities?

Yours,

Li Hu

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给你的英国好友Josh写一封关于你校学生课外活动开展情况的回信。

第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：一般现在时和一般过去时

结构：三段式。

第一段：提出写信目的（tell some details）；

第二段：介绍课外活动的意义和内容（meaning and content）；

第三段：我最喜欢的课外活动及原因（My favorite after-class activity and reason）。

第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）

be interested in,enrich,varied and colorful,be encouraged to do, the meaning of, provide…with, after-class activities

第三步：连词成句

1. Learning that you are interested in our school activities, I'd like to tell you some details.

2. To enrich students' school life and improve learning quality, our school provides us with varied and colorful after-class activities.

3. We are encouraged to participate in such competitions as English speech and English dubbing, in which our interest and talent are fully developed.

4. Among all the activities, what pleases me most was visiting a packaging factory last year.

5. It was also because of this experience that I understood the real meaning of labor creating life.

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。

第五步：润色修改