Question

【题目】假定你是李华，你计划和同学去当地博物馆参观中国瓷器(Chinese Porcelain)展。请给喜欢中国文化的外教Josie写封邮件，邀她一同前往，内容包括:

1.出发及返回时间:

2.活动内容:了解中国瓷器的历史，欣赏首次展出的中国瓷器等。

注意:适当增加细节，使行文连贯，词数100左右。

Dear Josie,

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Yours truly,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Josie,

Having learned you are interested in Chinese culture, I’d like to invite you to join us for a visit to the local museum next Saturday to appreciate Chinese porcelain.

During the visit, we will learn abundant information about its history. What is the most important is that we have a chance to appreciate some delicate and rare porcelain, some of which is exhibited for the first time. As we all know, porcelain was a Chinese invention and is famous for the finest quality. Thus, you will definitely have a fantastic feast for your eyes. Besides, we should be back around 4pm. If you can come, please let us know and we’ll wait for you at the gate at 8:00am.

I’m Looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.

【解析】

这是一篇应用文。本篇要求考生给外教写信，邀请她去参观中国瓷器展，并介绍相关情况。

第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时

结构：总分

要求：

1. 表明写信目的

2.

1）出发及返程时间

2）活动内容:了解中国瓷器的历史，欣赏首次展出的中国瓷器等

3. 期待老师的参加

第二步：列提纲（重点词组）

be interested in/ invite sb to do sth/ on behalf of/ learn about/ have a chance to do sth/ plan to do sth/ set off/ be famous for/ date back to/ have a better understanding of/for the first time

第三步：连词成句

There will be an exhibition about Chinese porcelain held next Sunday.

Knowing that you are interested in Chinese traditional culture, so I’d like to invite to join us, on behalf of my classmates.

During the visit, we will have a better understanding of its history.

What is the most important is that we have a chance to appreciate some delicate and rare porcelain, some of which are exhibited for the first time.

As we all know, porcelain was a Chinese invention and is famous for the finest quality.

Thus, you will definitely have a fantastic feast for your eyes.

By the way, we plan to set off at 8:00am and back at 4pm.

If you can come, please let us know and we’ll wait for you at the gate

第四步：连句成篇（加入衔接词或从句）

表示并列的连词：and/but/or/so…

状语从句连词：because/ if/ though/ although…

定语从句连词：which/ that/ when/ where…

第五步：修改润色（加入高级词汇或短语）