Question

【题目】假如你是李越, 你的朋友John喜欢玩网络游戏, 学习成绩明显受到影响。 作为朋友, 请你写一封信, 劝告他远离电脑游戏, 回归正常生活。要点如下：

1. 玩网络游戏的危害(至少两点)；

2. 你的建议(至少两点)；

注意：词数120左右 提示词：虚拟世界 virtual world

Dear John，

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Best wishes.

Yours，

Li Yue

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear John,

How are you doing recently? You failed the English test this week again, which made me deeply worried about you. I know how attractive the online games are and I also know it isn’t easy to break away from a habit, but it is high time that you took action and got rid of it.

You can’t deny the fact that online games do harm to us adolescents. Firstly, playing online games does damage to your health. For example, watching the screen for a long time is bad for your eyes. Secondly, your academic performance will suffer from online games. Due to a lack of self-control, you’ve got addicted to it. As a result, you can’t focus your attention in class, which accounts for your failure in exams.

Here is some advice for you and I hope you’ll find it helpful. First of all, make a plan to quit and stick to it. Each time you feel like playing online games, do something else instead, like listening to music or doing sports with your friends. Secondly, reward yourself with any progress you make. It is also a good choice to turn to others for help if necessary.

As the saying goes, nothing is impossible for a willing heart. I'm confident that you can break the bad habit.

Best wishes.

Yours,

Li Yue

【解析】

试题分析：本篇要求写一封信，根据提示信息来写。写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态。 4.注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，而且使用了多种句式和结构。文章第一段中的“You failed the English test this week again, which made me deeply worried about you.”使用了非限制性定语从句，意思是你这周的英语考试又一次不及格，这让我很是担心你。“I know how attractive the online games are”使用了“how+形容词+be”的感叹句式，意思是我知道网络游戏是多么的受欢迎。“but it is high time that you took action and got rid of it.”中使用了“it is high time that sb. did sth.”的固定句型，意思是是某人该做某事的时间了。第二段中“watching the screen for a long time is bad for your eyes”中使用了动名词短语作主语，意思是长时间看着屏幕对眼睛有害。本文还使用了大量短语，get rid of 消除， do harm to对……有害，suffer from受……的折磨，due to由于，accounts for归因于，As the saying goes俗话说。Firstly, First of all ,secondly,这些序数词的应用使文章条理更清晰，更紧凑。