Question

假如你是某中学的学生Tom。前不久，你参加了全国英语演讲比赛并获得一等奖。请用英语给校刊写一篇文章，谈谈你的体会。内容主要包括：

1．付出才有回报；

2．收获自信和友谊；

3．感激之情。

注意 1．词数100左右；

2．可适当增加细节以使行文连贯；

3．开头语已为你写好，不计入总词数。

Looking back to the National English Speaking Competition I took part in several days ago，I have a lot to share with you．

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Answer 1

Looking back to the National English Speaking Competition I took part in several days ago, I have a lot to share with you．

Firstly, I feel really delighted that I’ve won the first prize in the competition, which makes me understand the true meaning of the proverb “No pains, no gains”．Besides, I’ve established the friendship with students from all over our country, from whom I’ve learned a lot．More importantly, taking this competition has enabled me to overcome my fear of speaking in public, thus developing my self-confidence．Additionally, I owe many thanks to my teachers and judges, without whose help, I couldn’t have done such an excellent job．

To sum up, I will always treasure this meaningful and memorable experience．

【解析】

试题分析：假如你是某中学的学生Tom。前不久，你参加了全国英语演讲比赛并获得一等奖。请用英语给校刊写一篇文章，谈谈你的体会。内容主要包括：1．付出才有回报；2．收获自信和友谊；3．感激之情。要把所提示的点写全，把汉语翻译成通顺的英语句子，可根据内容要点适当增加细节，写作时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。避免全部使用简单句，根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩，注意要求的字数在100词左右，不要太多或太少。开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。

【亮点说明】Looking back to the National English Speaking Competition I took part in several days ago, I have a lot to share with you．现在分词短语做时间状语，并在句中使用了定语从句；Firstly, I feel really delighted that I’ve won the first prize in the competition, which makes me understand the true meaning of the proverb “No pains, no gains”．本句堪称文章最大亮点，句中使用了宾语从句，which引导的非限制性定语从句，同时换巧妙地运用了谚语“不劳无获”，更加为文章增色；Besides, I’ve established the friendship with students from all over our country, from whom I’ve learned a lot．句中from whom引导的非限制性定语从句和现在完成时态也堪称经典；More importantly, taking this competition has enabled me to overcome my fear of speaking in public, thus developing my self-confidence．句中运用了现在分词短语做结果状语，让人耳目一新；Additionally, I owe many thanks to my teachers and judges, without whose help, I couldn’t have done such an excellent job．句中别出心裁地使用了without whose help引出的非限制性定语从句，让文章更上一层楼。高超跌出，精彩纷现。

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