Question

目前，校园安全事故时有发生。请用英语写一篇100～120词的短文，简单描述一下校园安全问题并提出改进的措施。

Answer 1

One possible student version:
Nowadays more and more attention is paid to campus safety, including bicycle theft, traffic accidents and students’ getting injured in school. It is directly related to the healthy growth of young students and the happiness of millions of families. How to protect us students?
There are several ways. First, we should raise our safety awareness---to take care of ourselves in school. Second, traffic regulations must be observed. Besides, we should be more careful in taking physical exercise. Last but not least, we should always stay calm when having trouble with other students. We should solve the problem by communicating rather than quarrel and fight.
All teachers and students should make joint efforts to create a safe campus environment.

试题分析：考查开放性短文写作。本文的话题是校园安全。首先要描述校园安全的现状，最近一段时间校园安全问题频现，引起广泛关注。分析原因方面可以从社会，学校家长学生对校园安全重视不够，措施不得力，实施不到位。改进的措施可以从加强教育，更新设备等方面进一步展开。要求考生在保证内容要点全部概括的基础上可以充分发挥自己的想象，进而用自己的语言来表达某种观点或看法，增添了写作的灵活性，同时能较好地考查考生的想象能力和英语语言表达能力。
点评：开放性作文只给出了一个话题，给考生自由发挥的余地很大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体，如besides, further, last but not least等。在发表个人观点的时候，可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。