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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下短文。短文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

When Joe left university,she got a good job in the bike factory.But after he had been worked there for some years,he decided to have a change,so he put a notice in several newspaper.It stated what experience he had and the kind of job he will like to have.One of the answers he received was about a man looking for a job,too.This man wrote to him,"Dear sir,when you get a new job,being kind enough to give my name or address to your present boss as I have beer trying to find a position like yours for a long time."After he read the letter,he sudden realized he had done was really foolish.

Answer 1

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【解析】1.Joe是一个男孩，从下文也可知道把she---he。

2.句意：在一家自行车工厂得到了一份工作。故把the---a。

3. But after he had been worked there for some years for +一段时间 ， 用完成时。而had been worked 是被动，应给为主动。去掉been。

4. several后跟可数名词复数，故把newspaper--- newspapers。

5.句意：他想要的这种工作。would like to do sth.愿意做某事，故把will---would。

6.句意：他收到的一个回复是来自一个也找工作的人。根据句意可知把about---from。

7.此句是when引导的时间状语从句，主句没有主语，所以是祈使句，故把being---be。

8.句意：把我的姓名和地址给你现在的老板。此处是并列的谓语动词，故把or---and。

9.副词修饰动词，故把sudden---suddenly。

10.句意：他突然意识到他所做的真的很愚蠢。此处的宾语从句没有引导词，从句没有宾语，故在he前加what。