Question

短文改错

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一个横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
            2.只允许修改10处，多者（从十一处起）不计分。

     I like music very much, pop songs in particular. Every evening then I am doing homework and at
weekends when I at home, I always play some of my favorite songs on my tape recorder. The familiar
patterns of notes attracts me into the colorful world of music. Now and then I stopped to follow the
songs. Sometimes, my mother comes in, asking me to focus my attention to my homework. She does
not like the pop music. Like most grown-ups, she enjoys folk songs, because the peace music reminds
her of their beautiful life when she was young. It is certain which people of different age understand music
differently and enjoy different kinds of music.
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Answer 1

     I like music very much, pop songs in particular. Every evening then I am doing homework and at 
                                                                                                  1.when
weekends when I ∧at home, I always play some of my favorite songs on my tape recorder. The familiar
                            2.am
patterns of notes attracts me into the colorful world of music. Now and then I stopped to follow the 
                          3.attract                                                                                   4.stop
songs. Sometimes, my mother comes in, asking me to focus my attention to my homework. She does
                                                                                                             5.on
not like the pop music. Like most grown-ups, she enjoys folk songs, because the peace music reminds
        6. 去掉                                                                                                 7.peaceful 
her of their beautiful life when she was young. It is certain which people of different age understand music
          8. her                                                                    9. that                        10. ages
differently and enjoy different kinds of music.