Question

【题目】

（写作内容）

1. 用约30个单词概述柱状图信息的主要内容；

2. 用约120个单词对文中所述话题进行讨论, 内容包括：

（1）外卖快递人员导致事故的原因；

（2）如何解决这一问题你有什么看法。

（写作要求）

1. 作文中可以利用了解到的经历, 也可以参照阅读材料的内容, 但不得直接引用原文中的句子；

2. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；

3. 不必写标题。

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Answer 1

【答案】As we can see from the materials, China’s food-delivery business is booming, with the value of meals rising sharply. However, traffic accidents also arise, threatening the safety of road users including deliverymen themselves.

What makes deliverymen take risks? Several reasons account for the phenomenon. For one thing, fearing being fined for being late or getting bad reviews, deliverymen choose to jump traffic lights instead of obeying traffic rules. For another, with great pressure of raising their family, deliverymen have to work themselves to the bone for more money, even when exhausted, putting their lives at risk.

To solve the problems, I firmly believe that proper measures should be taken. On one hand, the government should make regulations to prevent them from violating traffic rules. On the other hand, food delivery service companies should educate them and make sure their workers are not overloaded. If so, all can enjoy the benefits of food delivery services.

【解析】试题本文是一篇任务型写作。共分两个任务：用约30个单词概述柱状图信息的主要内容；第二个任务用约120个单词对文中所述话题进行讨论, 内容包括：（1）外卖快递人员导致事故的原因；（2）如何解决这一问题你有什么看法。第二部分给出了写作提纲。注意完成第一任务时，语言使用应简练、准确、到位。在第二个任务中，应涵盖题目所列出的两个要点。本文应主要使用一般现在时态。写作过程中注意使用平时学到的短语和句型，注意行文的连贯和逻辑性。

【亮点说明】

本文是一篇任务型写作。文章内容覆盖了柱状图信息所体现的所有信息，并给出自己的看法。段落清晰，语句精炼，文中使用高级词汇和句子。As we can see from the materials, China’s food-delivery business is booming, with the value of meals rising sharply.句中as引导非限制性定语从句；traffic accidents also arise, threatening the safety of road users including deliverymen themselves.现在分词做自然的结果状语；fearing being fined for being late or getting bad reviews, deliverymen choose to jump traffic lights instead of obeying traffic rules.现在分词做原因状语；To solve the problems, I firmly believe that proper measures should be taken.动词不定式做目的状语；另外，However, For one thing, For another, On one hand, On the other hand, If so,等的运用使文章层次分明，上下文过渡流畅。