Question

某英语网站的论坛正就“如何保持友谊”这一话题进行讨论。请以 “How to keep friendship”为题，写一篇英语文章，参与讨论。

参考要点如下：

1.       与朋友保持联系；

2.       尊重朋友，诚实待人；

3.       朋友有困难时及时帮助等。

注意：

1.词数：120-150； 

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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Answer 1

【答案】

How to keep friendship

As we all know, friendship plays an important role in our life. If we have a close friend, we can share happiness and worries, which can make us enjoy a much happier life.

Since friendship makes a great difference to us, we need to take it seriously and try to keep friendship. My tips are as follows: Firstly, we should keep in touch with our friends by sending e-mails, writing letters or spending some time together regularly. Secondly, we should respect our friends and be honest with them. In addition, good friends are supposed to help each other when in trouble. Just as the old saying goes, “A friend in need is a friend indeed.”

In a word, if we want to keep friendship, we’d better treat our friends as we want to be treated.

【解析】

试题分析：考查半开放性作文。本文的话题是“如何保持友谊”；可以从与朋友保持友谊的方法：电话，短信，经常聚会等多种方式。与朋友相处时，热情大方，真诚。能为朋友做自己能做的事情。可以从这几个方面着手展开。在你的能力范围之内，要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，选择句式时也要有变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。

考点：考查半开放性作文

点评：半开放性作文给出了一个话题，并有部分的文字提示。给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体，如besides, further, last but not least等。在发表个人观点的时候，可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。