Question

南阳一中将于2013年10月28日举行建校110周年校庆活动。假设你是校学生会主席李华，现将代表全体学生邀请学校优秀毕业生陈明（现于清华大学学习）回校参加校庆典礼活动。请 根据以下要点写一封e-mail 向陈明发出邀请。
要点： 1. 10月28日上午9点，举行“庆祝南阳一中建校110年周年庆典”，地点南阳一中操场。2.下午3点在报告厅给学生做报告，内容关于介绍大学生活及给予他们学习生活方面的建议。3. 10月23日前回复是否可以前来。
注意：1. 词数120个左右。  2. 信的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。
提示词：110周年庆典：the 110^th anniversary celebration
Dear Chen Ming,
How is everything with you? ___________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Chen Ming,
How is everything with you? Our school is going to hold her 110th anniversary celebration on October 28,2013.I’m Li Hua, chairman of the Student Union.Now on behalf of all students, I’m writing to invite you to come back to attend the ceremony.
Now let me introduce the related activities for you. The ceremony are all the teachers and students together with some outstanding graduates at home and abroad.  What’s more, I wonder if it is convenient for you to deliver a lecture hall at 3:00 pm.It would be better if you could introduce the college life and offer some advice on our life and study. We’d be very grateful if you could let me know whether to participate by October 23.
We would be looking forward to your coming with great pleasure. Your early reply will be highly appreciated.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua

试题分析：本文是一封邀请信。要求代表全体学生邀请学校优秀毕业生陈明（现于清华大学学习）回校参加校庆典礼活动。请 根据以下要点写一封e-mail 向陈明发出邀请。文章具有很强的可写性，内容贴近考生的实际情况，考生有话可说，有话可写。文章的要点也基本上都给出来了，但只是一个提纲，考生还需要做适当的发挥。在写作的过程中要注意使用合适的连接词，同时也要注意使用一些高级的句型如强调句，倒装句等，让文章更上档次。本更有文采。同时在列举措施的时候要使用合适的连接词如：for one thing，What’s more等，让文章看起来很有条理，也很流畅。本篇文章在写作时不要啰嗦，力求简洁的表达自己的观点。
【亮点说明】Now on behalf of all students, I’m writing to invite you to come back to attend the ceremony.这句话用了on behalf of代表， Now let me introduce the related activities for you. 这句话用了过去分词做定语， I wonder if it is convenient for you to deliver a lecture hall at 3:00 pm.这句话用了宾语从句和it做形式主语， We’d be very grateful if you could let me know whether to participate by October 23.这句话用了疑问词+to do做宾语，还有文章还用了What’s more,这样的词使文章更加连贯。