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2012伦敦奥运会展示了我国体育强国的实力,孙杨等奥运冠军已逐渐成为青少年的偶像。“如何与奥运冠军一同成长”已成为各级学校、教育机构青少年的热点话题。请根据以下提示,写一篇发言稿。
内容要点如下:
1.奥运冠军的共同点:①追求卓越;②尊重他人(对手,裁判,媒体等);③永不言败。
2.如何做生活中的冠军:①明确的目标是动力的源泉;②专注和良好的心态是成功的决定因素;③你的观点(至少两点)。
注意:1.对所给要点,不要简单翻译,要有适当发挥;
2.词数100左右。短文中已写好的部分,不计入总词数;
3.参考词汇:追求pursue; 卓越excellence; 因素factor
Boys and girls,
Our great motherland has seen 2012 London Olympic Games, and we admire all the Olympic Champions very much.
That's all. Thank you!


One possible version:
oys and girls,
Our great motherland has seen 2012 London Olympic Games, and we admire all the Olympic Champions very much.
All the Olympic Champions have much in common. They go all out to be excellent—swifter, higher, and stronger. They show respect for everyone. Besides, faced with one failure after another, they never give up.
How can we become a champion in real life and make a difference? Firstly, we must set a goal, which will inspire us to pursue what we want, no matter what difficulties we may come across. Secondly, concentration and a good state of mind are decisive factors in success. What's more, we must learn to deal with stress, build up self­confidence and try to focus on our goals all the time. Only in this way can we become a champion in real life!
That's_all._Thank_you!

解析试题分析:本篇书面表达要求以 “如何与奥运冠军一同成长”为题目, 根据提示写一篇发言稿。文章开头结尾已经给出,通过分析要点我们可以把中间正文段落分为两大部分,一部分介绍奥运冠军的共同点:①追求卓越;②尊重他人(对手,裁判,媒体等);③永不言败。第二部分讲述如何做生活中的冠军:①明确的目标是动力的源泉;②专注和良好的心态是成功的决定因素;③你的观点(至少两点)。因为要点较多,在写作时要注意使用表示顺序的连接词,比如firstly,secondly,on the one hand,on the other hand等,以使文章内容层次清晰。其次,因为要求写发言稿,所以文章应该使用第一人称,使用一般现在时,如过提出号召,则可以使用将来时态。再者,在文章语言上要有号召力,可以适当使用祈使句 。
【亮点说明】本篇范文层次清晰,要点全面,语言流畅自然。作者在第二段开头提出要点All the Olympic Champions have much in common.作为主题句,然后介绍了他们共同的特点。在第三段作者同样使用了总分的结构,以How can we become a champion in real life and make a difference?开头,这一问句既起到了过渡的作用,又起到点明本段中心的作用。然后在段中使用了表示顺序的连词firstly,secondly,what’s more等连接了三个要点,做到了层次分明,衔接紧凑。最后作者使用了一个倒装句Only in this way can we become a champion in real life!提出倡议,增强了语言的感染力。
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