Question

【题目】假设你是李华，于2020年6月3日搭乘国外某航空公司航班（flight number BA793）回国后，发现遗失了一个行李箱（suitcase）。现请用英文给该航空公司写一封信，请他们帮你寻找。

信件要点包括：

·陈述写信原因

·简要描述该行李

·说明其重要性

·期待回复并表示感谢

注意：词数80左右；

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,

I’m Li Hua. I took the flight number BA793 on June 3, 2020. But when I came to my home, I found I lost a suitcase. I am writing to you to request you to help me find it back.

My suitcase is a small blue one with a zip. There is a lable on the handle with my name and address on it. It is really important for me, because I had put all my important documents in it, including my ID card, passport and so on. Besides, it is what my father sent to me on my birthday.

Thanks for your kind consideration and I look forward to receiving your earliest reply.

Yours truly,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封信给航空公司，请求航空公司帮忙寻找丢失的行李箱，在信中描述行李箱的细节，最后对航空公司表示感谢。

第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态应为一般过去时和一般现在时。

结构：总分法

总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。

要求：1. 陈述写信原因

2. 描述行李箱的细节

1）简要描述该行李

2）说明该行李箱重要性

3. 表明期待回复并表示感谢

第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）

take the flight; lose a suitcase; request sb do sth; help sb do sth; find back; lable; on the handle; be important for; document; ID card; passport; consideration; look forward to

第三步：连词成句

1. I took the flight number BA793 on June 3, 2020.

2. I found I lost a suitcase.

3. I am writing to you to request you to help me find it back.

4. My suitcase is a small blue one with a zip.

5. There is a lable on the handle with my name and address on it.

6. It is really important for me, because I had put all my important documents in it, including my ID card, passport and so on.

7. Thanks for your kind consideration and I look forward to receiving your earliest reply.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

1.表文章结构顺序：First of all，Firstly/First，Secondly/Second…，And then，Finally，In the end，At last；

2.表并列补充关系：What is more，Besides，Moreover，Furthermore，In addition，As well as， not only…but (also)，including；

3.表转折对比关系：However，On the contrary，but，Although+clause(从句)，In spite of+n/doing，On the one hand…，On the other hand…，Some…，while others…，as for，so…that…；

4.表因果关系：Because，As，So，Thus，Therefore，As a result。

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，

第五步：润色修改

文章使用了非常好的短语和句子给文章增色，如with my name and address on it（with的独立结构）；including my laptop and one of my favorite books（现在分词伴随状语）；it is what my father sent to me on my birthday.（what引导的表语从句）；还有Besides等有效地使语句间连接紧凑。