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【题目】天气转暖，旅游成为人们的热点话题。我市旅游局举行“我看文明旅游”（My Views on Civilized Tour）的征文活动。请你用英文写一篇参赛稿件。

注意：1说明文明旅游（Responsible or civilized tourism behaviors）的重要性

2.人们应该如何践行文明旅游

3.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

4..词数100左右

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Answer 1

【答案】Responsible or civilized tourism behaviors are of great importance for everyone.Cultural relics and natural scenery belong to everyone,including the generations to come,so we should protect them.And good tourism behaviors can have a good effect on others to follow.

First,when we enjoy ourselves in tour sites,don't throw rubbish everywhere—you can take a small bag with you, and then throw them in the dustbin.Second,don't draw or write anything on the walls or anywhere,for it will be very annoying and it is hard to remove later.Besides,be friendly to the workers and other visitors,and give a hand if help is needed.

Join in and work together to make a difference!

【解析】试题分析：天气转暖，旅游成为人们的热点话题。我市旅游局举行“我看文明旅游”（My Views on Civilized Tour）的征文活动。要求用英文写一篇参赛稿件。说明文明旅游（Responsible or civilized tourism behaviors）的重要性；人们应该如何践行文明旅游。

写作时要认真阅读前面的提示，认清写作要求和提纲之间的关系，然后确定文章的主题、文体、人称和时态。根据所给要点，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来。写作时注意时态、语态的合理运用，同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【亮点说明】

本文是一篇英文参赛稿件。要点齐全，重点突出，语句通顺，过渡自然，文中使用高级词汇和句子。when we enjoy ourselves in tour sites,don't throw rubbish everywhere句中when引导时间状语从句；don't draw or write anything on the walls or anywhere,for it will be very annoying and it is hard to remove later句中for是并列连词，表示原因，堪称经典；give a hand if help is needed.条件句恰到好处；另外，of great importance，belong to，have a good effect on，First, Besides,等的运用为文章增色添彩。