Question

8．假设你是李津．你校英语校刊正在举办"E-books or Paper Books"的征文，请你用英语谈一下你对此的看法．短文应包含以下要点：
1）电子书的优势（如便宜，容易携带，节省空间等）；
2）纸质书的优势（如对眼睛伤害较少）；
3）谈谈你的看法．
注意：
1）词数：不少于100；
2）可适当加入细节，以使行文连贯；
3）文章开头已为你写好，不计入词数．
There is a heated discussion among my fellow students over the choice between e-books or paper book．
Some hold the view that e-books have so many advantages over paper books，one of which is its cheapness．Most e-books are much cheaper compared with paper books．Besides，they take up little space compared with paper books．
Others don't agree with them．They argue that reading from screens for a long time does too much harm to eyes，while comfortableness that paper books bring to readers always matters most to them．
However，as a student without too much pocket money，I prefer to read e-books．What's more，my schedule is so tight that choosing e-books online saves a lot of time．Therefore I would rather choose e-books at the cost of reading comfortableness．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲类作文，你校英语校刊正在举办"E-books or Paper Books"的征文，请你用英语谈一下你对此的看法本作文中给出的要点比较具体，故需要准确表达．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，注意要适当拓展，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化．
（高分句型一） Some hold the view that e-books have so many advantages over paper books，one of which is its cheapness．
该句使用that引导同位语从句，作为view的内容；which引导非限制性定语从句．
高分句型二）What's more，my schedule is so tight that choosing e-books online saves a lot of time．
so…that…如此以至于，句意为我的日程安排如此紧张以至于选择电子书节省很多时间．
高级词汇：advantage优点；compared with与…相比；take up占据；would rather宁愿．

解答   There is a heated discussion among my fellow students over the choice between e-books or paper books．
    （高分句型一） Some hold the view that e-books have so many advantages over paper books，one of which is its cheapness．Most e-books are much cheaper compared with paper books．Besides，they take up little space compared with paper books．（电子书的优点）
    Others don't agree with them．They argue that reading from screens for a long time does too much harm to eyes，while comfortableness that paper books bring to readers always matters most to them．（电子书的缺点）
    However，as a student without too much pocket money，I prefer to read e-books．（高分句型二）What's more，my schedule is so tight that choosing e-books online saves a lot of time．Therefore I would rather choose e-books at the cost of reading comfortableness．（我的看法）

点评 这类文章书写时，需要做到脉络清晰，并且观点明确，理由得当．首先审题，明白文章的话题主要是什么，也就是整篇文章的中心，其次就是要抓住题目给出的主要内容，这也就是给文章的主要脉络进行了定格，所以这类文章在书写时，对于预言逻辑能力的运用能力，词汇和句型的使用能力，文章连接的高要求较高，同时学生在书写时，对于字数也要进行适当的控制．