Question

【题目】请用英语写一篇短文，介绍《时代》杂志2014年度人物“埃博拉斗士”。内容如下：

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参考词汇：埃博拉斗士：the Ebola fighters

《时代》年度人物：Time's Person of the Year

卫生保健工作者：health care worker

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只能用5个句子表达全部内容。

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句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章连贯。

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Answer 1

【答案】Chosen by the magazine's editors each year，Time's Person of the Year is an individual or group of individuals who have had the greatest impact on news or people’s life that year．On December 10，the magazine named the Ebola fighters its 2014 "Person of the Year"，applauding the work of those fighting Ebola in western Africa，where an outbreak of the virus has killed thousands of people．Five people，including two doctors，a nurse，an ambulance driver and a health care worker were pictured on the covers of the magazines．Among them are Ebola survivor Salome Karwah and American doctor Kent Brantly．The former ，who lost both her parents to the disease，survived herself and began to care for other sufferers，and the latter became infected with Ebola while treating patients and later recovered from the virus．

【解析】本篇书面表达是一篇提纲作文。提纲作文写作的时候注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；语言表达要符合英语习惯。4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种句式和结构。比如介词短语，过去分词短语Chosen by the magazine's editors each year，现在分词短语while treating patients and later recovered from the virus，倒装句Among them are Ebola survivor Salome Karwah and American doctor Kent Brantly，定语从句where an outbreak of the virus has killed thousands of people．”和who have had the greatest impact on news or people’s life that year．。这些句式的使用增加了文章的可读性，反映了作者扎实的语言基础。