Question

【题目】假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Mike来信询问你的家乡是否有雾霾天气，情况如何。请你按照以下提示给他回一封e-mail. 内容如下：

1. 由于大气污染程度十分严重，自去年年底以来发生数次雾霾天气。

2. 人们已经意识到雾霾天气的危害，正在采取各种措施减少其发生。

3. 你在日常生活中打算为此做些什么。

要求：

1.参考词汇：雾霾haze；雾霾天气 hazy weather

2.词数在100词左右。开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Mike,

I’m glad to receive your letter, and thank you for your caring for the weather and my health. Now I’d like to tell you something about the haze.

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Mike,

I’m glad to receive your letter, and thank you for your caring for the weather and my health. Now I’d like to tell you something about the haze.

Since the end of last year, the hazy weather has occurred a lot of times in my hometown, which has done great harm to our daily life. Many traffic accidents happened just because of the heavy smog. Besides, more and more citizens have to go to see the doctor due to the serious diseases caused by the haze. A great number of people have to stay at home for fear of the poisonous air.

As for me, I will go to school by bike or on foot, and I won’t throw the waste anywhere. In addition, I will tell the people I meet to protect the environment. Would you like to tell me some good ideas? I’m looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：本文是提纲类作文，要点已给出。写作时可适当增加细节以使行文连贯，同时要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。

【亮点说明】本文是一篇电子邮件，格式正确，采用三段式，结构严谨，布局合理，使用高级句子。Since the end of last year, the hazy weather has occurred a lot of times in my hometown, which has done great harm to our daily life. Since“自从……以来”的用法恰到好处，which引导的非限制性定语从句巧妙至极；more and more citizens have to go to see the doctor due to the serious diseases caused by the haze.比较级使用巧妙；I will tell the people I meet to protect the environment.省略that的宾语从句；另外，because of，Besides, As for me, In addition,的运用为文章增色添彩。