假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文.请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误.每句中最多有两处．错误仅涉及一个单词的增加.删除或修改．增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧).并在其下面写出该加的词．删除:把多余的词用(\)划掉．修改:在错的词下画一横线.并在该词下面写出修改后的词．注意:1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词,2 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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12．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
I always have a dream to be a fluency speaker．Therefore，I am too shy to say a word in public．What is just beyond my wildest imagination is fortune should bless me with a chance to realize my dream．One day，my English teacher asked me to go to her office and told us that I was given an opportunity to participate in an English speaking competition．Hear this，I could hardly hide my excitement．When making preparation for the competition，I write my speech heart and soul．After I finished the composition，I discussed it with my teacher and got many advice on how to improve it．Under the help of my English teacher，I made a great progress．

分析本文属于记叙文，讲述了我获得一个参加英语演讲比赛的机会，实现自己称为演讲家的梦想．

解答 I always have a dream to be a fluency speaker．Therefore，I am too shy to say a word in public．
                                           fluent                 However
What is just beyond my wildest imagination is∧fortune should bless me with a chance to realize
                                                                  that
my dream．One day，my English teacher asked me to go to her office and told us that I was given an
                                                                                                                   me
opportunity to participate in an English speaking competition．Hear this，I could hardly hide my
                                                                                     Hearing
excitement．When making preparation for the competition，I write my speech heart and soul．After I
                                      preparations                                wrote
finished the composition，I discussed it with my teacher and got many advice on how to improve it．
                                                                                              much
Under the help of my English teacher，I made a great progress．
With                                                            去掉a

1．fluency改为fluent 考查形容词．形容词fluent流利的；名词fluency流利，流畅；在英语中通常使用形容词做定语修饰名词，所以本句中使用fluent修饰名词speaker．
2．Therefore改为However 考查副词．句意：我一直有一个成为流利的演讲家的梦想，然而，我很害羞不敢当众发言．根据句意可知上下文之间存在转折关系，所以使用副词however表示转折．
3．is后面加that   考查表语从句．句意：我想象不到的是运气降临在我身上让我们有实现梦想的机会．本句中含有一个表语从句，表语从句前面的连词that是不能省略的．
4．us改为me 考查代词．句意：一天，我的英语老师要求我去她办公室并告诉我有一个参加英语演讲比赛的机会．根据句意可知英语老师告诉我，而不是我们，所以使用代词me充当tell的宾语．
5．Hear改为Hearing 考查非谓语动词．本句中动词hear与句子主语I构成主动关系，所以使用现在分词在句中作状语，且表示和谓语动词的动作同时发生．句意：听见这件事情，我机会隐藏不住自己的兴奋．
6．preparation改为preparations 考查固定搭配．固定搭配make preparations for…为…做准备．其中的名词preparation应该使用复数形式．
7．write改为wrote 考查时态．根据第四句中的one day…，可知本文讲述的是过去发生的事情，所以使用过去式wrote．
8．many 改为much 考查名词修饰语． advice是不可数名词，所以用much修饰．
9．Under 改为 With 考查介词搭配．with one's help/the help of sb 是固定搭配，意思是"在某人的帮助之下"．
10．去掉a 考查冠词． progress是不可数名词，所以去掉a．

点评这类题型考察基础知识较多．平时应注重积累，熟记一些句型及惯用结构．修改前先细读短文，标出出错的位置，改完以后还得细读短文，看看改过后的短文是否语意通顺，符合逻辑．

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