Question

1．在紧张的高三备考阶段，英语老师为了提高复习效率，广泛征求学生意见假如你叫张华，请根据以下提示，给英语王老师写封信．表达你们的需求和建议．
●适当放慢进度，留出思考时间；
●反复训练重要、易错知识点；
●指导方法；
●减少作业量以保证质量：
●给予更多鼓励．
注意：
1．根据以上内容写一篇短文，不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯．
2．词数：不少于l00词．开头和结尾已给出，小计入总词数．
Dear Mr．Wang，
We're so pleased that you are willing to share our views．
In the course of the general revision，what we need is solid foundation．
       ．
Yours sincerely，
Zhang Hua．

Answer 1

分析 亮点句型一：As for those important points which also make us confused，would you please give us more practice in case we forget？至于那些让我们困惑的重要点，请你多练习一下好吗以防我们忘记了．此句中which引导的是限制性定语从句，被修饰的先行词为points，which在从句中做主语；in case"万一，以防"是连词，引导条件状语从句．
亮点句型二：We would appreciate it if you would give us some encouragement from time to time．如果您能给我们一些不时的鼓励，我们将不胜感激．We would appreciate it if 用的是虚拟语气"如果…我们将不胜感激"．

解答 Dear Mr．Wang，
     We're so pleased that you are willing to share our views．
     In the course of the general revision，what we need is solid foundation．As you know，we didn't learn well enough in the first two years，so please slow down and make sure we have really mastered something．Besides，we need a little more time to think for ourselves．As for those important points which also make us confused，
would you please give us more practice in case we forget（亮点句型一）？Meanwhile，we need your instruction，for example，how to write in natural English．I still have another request：assign us less homework in order that we can do it more efficiently．【表达需求】
     By the way，we often feel frustrated，which has a very bad effect on our study．We would appreciate it if you would give us some encouragement from time to time（亮点句型二）．【寻求建议】

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实 的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．