Question

【题目】假如你是市一中学生李华,你要向本市一家媒体写信,反映你校周边环境污染问题,呼吁有关部门采取措施,保护环境。请根据以下内容写一封100词左右的投诉信。

1.校园位于山脚下,小河边,校内环境优美；

2.附近两年前建起了一家化工厂；

3.校园环境和师生健康受到严重影响；

4.请予以关注报道,引起有关部门重视。

话题参考词汇：排放污水: drain waste water 释放有毒气体: emit poisonous gas

有关部门 related departments

Dear editor,

I’m Li Hua,

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear editor，

I am Li Hua, a student from No. 1 Middle School. I am writing to draw your attention to the serious pollution caused by a local chemical plant near our school.

Our school lies at the foot of a mountain with a small river running by. With green trees and beautiful flowers growing healthily here and there, it looked like a beautiful garden, which provided us with a good environment. However, things have changed since a chemical plant was built near our school two years ago. It drains waste water into the river and emit poisonous gas into the air. The terrible pollution has done great harm to our health and the environment. The plants here don't grow as well as before. It's high time for the departments concerned to take measures to stop the pollution.

I hope you will give due attention to this matter, and give a detailed report to the serious pollution to make more people aware of the serious problem.

Thank you for your time and kind consideration.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】试题分析：本文是一封投诉信，你以中学生李华的身份向本市一家媒体写信，反映你校周边环境污染问题，呼吁有关部门采取措施，保护环境。请根据以下内容写一封100词左右的投诉信。校园位于山脚下,小河边,校内环境优美；附近两年前建起了一家化工厂；校园环境和师生健康受到严重影响；请予以关注报道,引起有关部门重视。写作时要认真阅读前面的提示，根据所给要点，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来。写作时注意时态、语态的合理运用，主次分明，详略得当，语言力求准确、简洁。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【亮点说明】

本文是一封投诉信，格式正确，结构严谨，文中使用高级词汇和句子。I am writing to draw your attention to the serious pollution caused by a local chemical plant near our school.过去分词做后置定语；, With green trees and beautiful flowers growing healthily here and there, 句中运用with的独立主格结构； it looked like a beautiful garden, which provided us with a good environment.句中which引导非限制性定语从句；things have changed since a chemical plant was built near our school two years ago.句中since引导时间状语从句；另外，However, done great harm to，as well as，It's high time for---，take measures等的运用使文章尽显风采。