Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文，文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线划掉；

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及修改均仅限一词。 2.只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。

In the summer holiday, we travelled to Qingdao and paid visit to my uncle there. It’s a long and bored journey. But the moment I arrived, I fall in love with the city. It’s such beautiful a city that I can hardly find any word to describe it.The streets are cleaning and the sky is blue. If you walk along the coast, you can feel the wind to blowing on your face. The sea is vast and sometimes you can find a boat or a ship. You may also do some fishing as far as it is permitted. Moreover, I think the driver there drive too fast in the street. You can never be too carefully when crossing the street.

Answer 1

1.把paid visit中间加上a

2.把bored 改为boring

3.把fall改为f ell

4.把such改为so

5.把cleaning改为clean

6.把wind后面去掉to

7.把far改为long

8.把moreover改为however

9.把driver改为drivers

10.把careless改为careful

【解析】

1. visit中间加上a；第一句we travelled to Qingdao and paid visit to my uncle there.，visit为可数名词，需加数量词，故加a

2. 改为boring；第二句It’s a long and bored journey. Bored “无聊的，无趣的，烦人的”。通常用来形容人的感受。Boring“无聊的，无趣的； 令人厌烦的”，用来形容物给人的感觉。这里是形容这次旅行既漫长又无聊，故把bored 改为boring

3. the moment I arrived, I fall in love with the city. 前面用arrived可知时态是过去式，后面fall也应该用过去时态。故把fall改为fell

4. such beautiful a city that I can hardly find any word to describe it.so和such修饰名词的结构是这样的：so + adj + a/an + n（可数），such+（a/an） n +adj 这里先接的是beautiful。要用so，句意：这是一个如此美丽的城市以至于我几乎找不到任何一个词来形容它。故把such改为so

5. 整齐的。第五句The streets are cleaning and the sky is blue. 句意：街道是干净的，天空是蓝色的。故把cleaning改为clean

6. you walk along the coast, you can feel the wind to blowing on your face. blowing on your face是用现在分词短语作状语。句意：如果你沿着海岸线行走，你会感觉到风吹着你的脸。故把wind后面去掉to。

7. fas as只要；远到…； 直到…为止，多表示程度范围达到。As long as只要； 如果； 既然； 由于。多表示条件满足，达到。第八句You may also do some fishing as far as it is permitted. 句意：只要被允许，你也可以去钓鱼。故把far改为long

8.adv.再者； 此外； 而且； 同时。However adv.不管到什么程度； 无论如何； 然而。第九句Moreover, I think the driver there drive too fast in the street. 句意：然而，我觉得那儿的街上开车的司机开得太快了。故把moreover改为however

9. I think the driver there drive too fast in the street. Driver是可数名词，应该用复数形式。句意：然而，我觉得那儿的街上开车的司机开得太快了。故把driver改为drivers

10. adj.粗心的； 无忧无虑的； 漫不经心的；careful adj.仔细的，小心的； 周到的。第十句You can never be too carefully when crossing the street.句意：过马路的时候，你在小心都不为过。故把careless改为careful

考点：考查短文改错